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Books 4 and 5 of the Long Earth series!

The Long Utopia: This book had a few things going on. The plot strand about Joshua Valienté's father and the 1800s past was a chore. The main plot of the book, however, relating to the silver beetle world, was great. A mystery! With a solution! And the ending was perfectly satisfying. I think this might be my favorite book of the series – if only due to the comparative lack of Joshua Valienté.

The Long Cosmos: This book just did not work for me at all. Mostly, it just felt like an exercise in wrapping up loose ends, with a giant red herring in the form of the Thinker. (They build a giant machine! ...that maybe possibly suggests to them to try to step North. Which has already been done by humans before in the previous book. Are you trying to tell me no-one tried it? Not even the Next with their emergency back-up super-stepper??) As I am still in my 20s, the theme of aging did not resonate. The Next managed to be even more turbo-obnoxious. The new characters introduced either became non-entities after one chapter (the GapSpace duo) or were annoying (Jan Roderick). I recognize the authors had to wrap things up, but the end note being "grandbabies ever after" instead of, say, passing on the torch (e.g. Indra Newton being part of an expedition to chart the Long worlds and search for alien life) was bleh. Also everything was just much too pat.

Overall, I think my biggest issue with the series is that it has a cool premise and worldbuilding, but the main characters are mostly terrible. I liked Sally Linsay okay enough, but she's basically the only engaging human in the entire series.

Lobsang, OTOH, was interesting. The Long Cosmos has a few places where it gestures at being interesting, and both of them involve Lobsang: the first, when he's in his simulated Tibetan village, LARPing a novice monk, with an actual Tibetan Buddhist abbot helping him in his path to enlightenment; the second, when it's revealed that Lobsang does not actually own himself despite trying, due to the guy in charge of Black Corporation interfering. I'd have liked more of either of those, and in general, an actual exploration of "Tibetan motorcycle repairman reincarnated as an AI" and possibly some actual Tibetan Buddhism. The humans are extremely specifically more-than-default Christian – Joshua is raised by nuns, who also feature heavily as characters throughout, and one of the other mains, Nelson, is a reverend/vicar – in proportions that made me feel all :/ about it. Having Lobsang's Buddhism be treated as more than scene setting/part of a LOLtastic character pitch would've helped immensely.

Also, it really bugs me that both of the authors are British, but all the books feel kind of parochial in a US flavor: everything seemingly happens in the geographical region of the US (save for some tiny excursions to Britain). Like, c'mon. You mentioned those Indigenous Australians going walkabout in the Long Earth at higher rates than other ethnicities; maybe visit one in Long Australia. Have something happen in Long Kyrgyzstan. Visit a world where the Sahara is not a desert. There's life outside the US, FFS.
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As it won the poll, I read it. It's ... well, my reaction is interesting.

I agree with the reports that the plot and character-work were worse than in A Memory Called Empire – the political threads did not quite feel like they congealed, esp wrt Lsel Station, and Three Seagrass's "oh yeah the Empire causes a power differential here" realization was kind of out of the left field. Martine could've written a completely functional book about Lsel Station politics, with Mahit dealing with the sabotage and idk possibly getting into some hometown intrigue, plus a look at how the threads of Empire extend even here via cultural imperialism, even if the Station is independent, and then written a sequel that was about the war and the aliens, since those two threads did not IMO congeal at all.

On the other hand, it was also about aliens with a nonhuman sense of cognition and first contact negotiations! This is like catnip to me, lol. So I really enjoyed the alien bit, and Twenty Cicada's thing at the end.

Also Eight Antidote was an adorable little dumpling. I loved reading him manipulate and be manipulated by a variety of people.

(Next up: The Long Utopia & The Long Cosmos; Blindsight; The Wandering Earth. In roughly that order.)
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A short book, 280 pages or so, and comparatively light imo. I usually like Egan's stuff, but the exploration of the world was a bit light, as was the whole conspiracy to keep the halves of the horseshoe apart. It could've done with either Del and Imogen jumping over the gap to a set of worlds with less of a continuity of history, or with more sense of mystery about why the passage was closed + why they were being hidden, or just of picking one section and writing that more in-depth. As it is, Del and Imogen get stranded and then drift forth on the kindness of strangers, not really facing any significant obstacles, and it all feels kind of pat, especially the ending. Egan's written better stuff, including semi-recently.
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Finally got around to reading this on Saturday. Book 3 of the Children of Time series, sequel to Children of Time and Children of Ruin. Previous books set up the Rus-Califi virus that gave sentience to spiders and octopuses, both on their own terraformed worlds (spiders on Kern's World and octopuses on Damascus), with one book dedicated to each. This book breaks the mold by introducing two new terraformed worlds (Rourke and Imir), introducing a new sentient (the corvids) that has not been created or even touched by the Rus-Califi virus, and having the focus of the book be not on the corvids, but on something introduced in the previous book: the Nod organism.

spoilers )

All in all, I'd say this was not as good as Children of Time, but better than Children of Ruin. (I really did not appreciate the octopuses.) I'm not sure if a fourth book is in the works, but I think one obvious path would be to have either a second of the alien engines or some other structure/relic from them, being encountered by one of the terraforming teams/an uplifted Earth species; later Earth colonists optional.

(P.S. Adrian, if you're reading this? Slime molds would be cool. Please steal.)
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Today's Fopinions February is for [personal profile] maggie33! I was asked to talk about my first fandom. But first, two things:

1. [community profile] space_swap sign-ups have started! They'll be ongoing until next week's Sunday, but please sign-up early if you can.
2. That Guardian post on the cast list is ... started. I wanted to check episode 1 to get one person's name, but ended up rewatching + screencapping alot, oops.

Now, without further ado: My first fandom qua fandom was David Weber's Honor Harrington series, a very loyalty kink-y MilSF book series where the author holds some hilarious/terrible opinions that seep through into the writing but writes an engaging battle scene nonetheless. While he is surprisingly okay with remembering that black people exist and putting women in his space military, there are zero queer people. However! There was one place where he specifically compared two dudes to an actual canon (het) couple, and those two dudes were pretty shippy in any case, so I went and googled.

Lo and behold, I found [personal profile] philomytha's A Commissioner's Duty, which was shipfic for the pair I'd been googling about. As I'd had some brushes with fandom beforehand*, I wasn't completely lost, and eventually ended up diving into AO3 and then DW and then diversifying my fandom portfolio. The rest is history.

(This post's icon from the French cover art for Flag in Exile, which is an amazing piece of art. The French cover arts are in general awesome, eg this one for Honor Among Enemies. Especially compared with the typical Baen cover art, lol.)

* Starting with writing fanfic of Walking With Dinosaurs at the age of 5-ish, and including squeeing over some now-forgotten animes together with friends in high school.
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And now I'm being all entertained by my Animorphs Fan Forum days! Ah, the loads of 20something Murikan Xtians who would obsessively wank about marriage equality, abortion, and climate change, and how all those things were wrong. The mod with the Harry Potter hateboner. The Cassie hate. The Cassie Defense Squad. The time when one person set up a Tobias hate thread with a long OP dissing Tobias since he wasn't ~relateable~ enough, and the aforementioned mod set up individual hate threads for all the other animorphs, clearly patterning it all off that one thread. The Tobias stans.

And, looking at my fic there, I think the biggest improvement in my writing happened between FFN and AO3, and during my AO3 time. AFF and FFN, I wrote comic crackfic, but on AO3 I finally got the handle on how to write other things, too.

The trip was prompted by a few FFA descussions that left me desiring Visser Three/Alloran mind screw dirtybadwrong, Elfangor/Arbron either before or after Arbron got stuck as a Taxxon, and/or an AU where the Taxxons all acquire human morphs and become sentient human beings who will have sentient children, as opposed to fucking boa constrictors.
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As someone who generally only has one WIP at a time, this was rather hard. Nevertheless, I started some fics that I really should write, so here are sections from all of them. Also, if anyone has any ideas for my Trope Bingo's Accidental Baby Acquisition square, I'll take them.

The Cop/Detective AU Square (Vorkosigan)

“He was lying in a pool of his own blood. Didn't you feel any concern?”

“Oh, neurotypical people do weird shit all the time for opaque reasons they find perfectly obvious. I assumed Jones was doing something like that.”



The Wild Card, i.e. Sex Pollen square (Honorverse)

“I didn't know you were a flower person, Tom”, Denis LePic said as he barged into Thomas Theisman's office as part of his daily routine of making sure Theisman actually left the premises.

Theisman rolled his eyes. “They were left by some advocacy group or other. Eloise had some minion bring them over to my office to ‘brighten the mood’ or something to that effect.”

“She's hoping you get hay fever and go home to sleep.” Denis smirked and leaned over to sniff one of the flowers on Theisman's desk. “These smell nice”, he said. “Try it.”

The flower was large and purple, reminding Theisman of an Old Earth sunflower, except smaller. Its leaves were smooth and shiny. It smelled sweet and earthy, like the tea that some Legislaturalist officers had drunk often. Denis was nibbling on his ear.



Unrelated Vorparadijs Casefic (Vorkosigan)

Filippa Cherenkova looked at him with an expression that was easily interpreted as “you do realize that what you said right there was FUCKING INSANE”.

ImpSec Lieutenant Aleksei Kostolitz, Imperial Liaison Officer (or whatever his superiors had decided to call his position today), decided that the best course of action was to repeat what he had said.

“The Emperor would like for us to assist Imperial Auditor Vorparadijs in his investigation of the incidents in Vorcault District. Countess Vorcault and the Count's aunt, Lady Irina, have been stabbed to death. After the tragic murder of the Count's favorite horse, he called on the Emperor to help solve this politically motivated crime.”

“So, nobody cares about the women, but the moment a horse kicks it, it's boohoo Sire please help?” Filippa was somewhere between disbelief and “oh really”.

Aleksei nodded.



Thoughts? Sacrificial offerings? Critique?

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On AO3
Summary:
Cathy Montaigne writes herself letters. For [personal profile] aoifes_isle (thanks for the prompt!)

Trope Bingo: Road Trip )

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It's decent hard-ish SF space opera (yes, I know). The plot was good, but he didn't wrap it up well.

Revelation Space: Reynolds introduces two (two!!) awesome female viewpoint characters (Ilia Volyova, Ana Khouri) plus one annoying male one (Dan Sylveste, annoying entitled bore #1). Of the plot-important other characters, most are male. Works perfectly well on its own, closes introduced plot lines decently. Apparently considered 'ponderous' by SF critics.

Redemption Ark: Another awesome female viewpoint character!! (Skade) Back-to-back badassery and sisterhood with Ana and Ilia!! Then come two annoying viewpoint dudes (Nevil Clavain, annoying self-righteous bore, and Scorpio, annoying murderous pig - literally) and a meh-to-annoying female viewpoint character (Antoinette Bax, why didn't you ever speak to other women or, um, acquire a personality beyond "plucky-ish hero personality(TM)"?)

Absolution Gap: Two viewpoint guys (Quaiche and Grelier). I kind of liked Grelier. Rashmika Els is introduced; her POV is okay until the plot hits her. Then the archetypical whiny entitled dude, Vasko Malinin comes onstage. Ugh.

The spoilery stuff )
Well, I guess Mr. Reynolds did something right, seeing as I'm so motivated to fix everything :P
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Wordcount: 345
Synopsis: Denis' secretary ponders on the smutsies and how they reflect the values of society.


Totally a fix fic )
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Chris Beckett - Dark Eden
A spaceship crashes on an unknown world. Several generations later, the descandants have filled up their valley. A dude decides something must be done.
Vaguely interesting society, could have gone without the main character wanting to establish male supremacy etc in his breakaway tribe. Also, the characterization of the spaceship's only woman made me go gaah. And the characterization of the main character's mother. Also, the main character is meant to be likeable, despite being something of an asshole.
Bechdel pass.

Chris Beckett - The Holy Machine
The whole world has become a patchwork of religious totalitarian states, apart from Illyria. Our (male) main character decides to run away from the totalitarianizing Illyria, with a high-quality sex bot.
Came across as saying that all high-tech/atheist societies are morally bankrupt. The main character's mother comes across as a shy ten-year-old girl. (Beckett had a decent idea and went too far with it.) Also, the main character is meant to be likeable, despite being something of an asshole. He still gets the girl.
Bechdel pass.

David Brin - Sundiver
There are aliens in the Sun. Our (male) main character is called to help with the investigation.
Unlike Brin's The Postman, I was able to slog through. Suffers from Smurfette Syndrome. The main character is made of Boring. Brin's style of writing bores me. The only woman is competent, but for whatever reason, doesn't do anything in the climax, even though her doing something would make more sense than the actual climax. Also, she's tossed off as a reward to the main character, even though they have zero chemistry.
Bechdel fail.

Gary Gibson - Angel Stations
A wavefront of radiation is traveling towards Earth. First, however, it will hit and sterilize Kasper, which has sentient aliens. The story of people wanting to save the Kaspians.
Suffers from Smurfette Syndrome. All the important aliens are male, even if female ones exist. Bonus points for lesbians, even if it's only in flashbacks. Not only readable, but interesting.
Bechdel pass.


Generally, when a SF author needs to come up with a culture that differs from the current mainstream, zie creates male supremacy, often religiously mandated. (See: Masada from David Weber's Honorverse, The World Whose Name Eludes Me from Gary Gibson's Shoal Sequence) Not only is this annoying to those of us who would like to have even the smallest feminist sympathies, it is repetitive, overdone and boring.
So, when I started reading Dark Eden, I was happy: a matriarchal society! Finally! Then, Beckett starts writing in a way that implies that all the society's woes are the result of its insularity, which is caused by its matriarchality. And by the end it's patriarchal, militarized, etc. Agh.
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Wordcount: 389
Summary: Honor goes horse riding.

Neigh! )

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Title: Rain
Rating: G
Wordcount: 494
Synopsis: Theisman briefs Saint-Just on his plans for a Manty attack. Or rather, everything else around the briefing.

Eeva-Liisa Manner, I'm tired of being strong )

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Title: Meet Cordelia
Rating: G
Wordcount: 1371
Synopsis: The Rene Magritte jumps to Barnett while Cordelia Ransom is present. Much scrambling occurs.

Denial of female orgasm is the hallmark of capitalist dictatorship! )

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Title: Watch our Nation Glow
Wordcount: 123
Rating: G
Synopsis: A sonnet on the Theisman Coup, as threatened.

To Grow and Glow )

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First lines of the ten last fics I wrote, (order of descending recentness; newest at the top) then commentary.
Feel free to ask for DVD commentary on anything I've written in the comments.

Here be stuff )

Think I'm the worst analyzer in the history of analysis? Drop a comment! Drop a comment anyway!
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Title: Something to Live For
Pairing: Thomas Theisman / Denis LePic
Rating: T
Wordcount: 2100, 2098 or 2161 (LibreOffice, AO3, gedit respectively)
Synopsis: Theisman's coup has been uncovered before it could be executed. Denis LePic ruminates in a cell.


is harder to find. )

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